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James McInerney
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0 posted 2004-03-31 05:09 PM


Protect your tears,
Keep them safe,
Upon the memories of me,
May they wash your face.

Open your heart,
So that it may breathe,
Show them your colours,
And they will believe.


© Copyright 2004 James McInerney - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2004-03-31 05:49 PM


Interesting little twist of perspective....Very enjoyable..


Eric

Suetang
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2 posted 2004-03-31 06:12 PM


Hello James

So few words said so very much.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-06 07:14 PM


Good one James.
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-04-06 07:56 PM


I really like this James.
Simple, yet oh, so honest.  
Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2004-04-06 09:49 PM


I liked this one.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-04-07 12:57 PM


yes....
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-04-07 01:27 PM


Very very nice...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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