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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-03-31 03:30 PM


Oh to those eyes I do adore,
that lie upon such fair a face;
this heart can wish to do no more,
but search for more a fairer place.

Such magical realms they do conceive,
that all eternity can lie in their depth,
but oh such magical eyes do but theive;
hearts by lying, in too false a death.

How radiant they are to love to this,
that the night, to them, is merely prey;
for so less a passion is found in kiss,
yet so much more is found in display.

These eyes do shame those summer skies,
that shine so brightly, to outdo love;
for unto them, such heated passion lies-
and so much more, these eyes do move.

For such beauty this heart does long,
believing it may exist in more fairer place,
but to that, this heart did but wrong,
for no fairer a place is thy loving face!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2004-03-31 06:14 PM


Wow, Jared!!

You certainly live up to your name.  Beautiful words of love and romance that were so much enjoyed.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Martie
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2 posted 2004-03-31 06:17 PM


Sweetly romantic...with an old fashioned flavor.  Enjoyed!
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3 posted 2004-03-31 06:33 PM


Jared~
Oh yes ... this is the old fashioned romantic thoughts at play~

BEAUTIFUL !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-04-01 01:56 AM


always romantic
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