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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2004-03-31 12:44 PM



Echoes of wonder
Fountains of sin
Youth, in all its
Exhuberant madness
Often time catches up
To even the wealthiest of men
Lying defenseless
In darkened shadows
Crying empty tears
Of shame and guilt
Hoping to regain the vision
Of yesterday's dreams
Only to find out
That tomorrow has come and gone

© Copyright 2004 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-31 12:49 PM


true...and sad...a good write
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2 posted 2004-03-31 12:52 PM


Jeffrey,
TOO often true, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2004-03-31 01:36 PM


so sadly true as time waits for no one.
enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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4 posted 2004-04-06 07:16 PM


Yes, all so true!
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5 posted 2004-04-06 09:24 PM


Jeffrey~
So very good to see you again~
This is an intensely profound message~
Nicely done, my friend~

I hope you and yours are well and happy~
Have a joyous Easter celebration~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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