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Open Poetry #31

Within the Morning Mists

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-03-31 06:10 AM

So small of droplets,
Blurring my window vision,
With moaning silence
As splashing steps carry on
Notice no water
Upon ground or falling from sky,
Damp sorrows of soul and eye.

Gloom

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-31 06:17 AM

Gives me shivers and makes me sigh.
Great write!
Love, Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-03-31 06:38 AM

Wonderful metaphors, sir...
you place the reader
inside your soul...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-31 12:53 PM

melancholic...perfectly "gloom"y

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

4 posted 2004-03-31 12:55 PM

kind of reminds me of a ghost story (don't ask me why) LOL

wonderfully, gloomy, write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-03-31 01:47 PM

Oh! Goodness this one hit me in the heart it did. Prof. this one is going into my library! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

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