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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-03-30 11:30 PM


Oh why must thou cast doubt about love;
to even the rose, thy love is believed-
for such passion does reign from above;
reflecting in blooms of love conceived?

The day doubts not the night's relief,
for history has proven for this to be:
ne'er in past or present is love to thief,
but theiving the hearts of you and me.

Just as the ground beneath thy feet-
stands so firm and unwavering still,
so is thy unfaltering love so concrete,
that even after death, love shall fulfill.

So confident is the nightingale,
that his loving pledge will return;
thy heart to this shall never fail-
so pure and true a love won't adjourn!


© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2004-03-31 01:54 AM


A fine example of a well metered and rhymed traditional write.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-03-31 03:05 AM


nice
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