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James_A_Fraser
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0 posted 2004-03-30 07:15 PM



Twilight Treasures

as at sunset
when eyes adjust to less
and see more

the world quiets
so that tiny sounds
ring fervent

when every sense
celebrates the remnants
like schoolyard treasures

I rejoice that here
so near the end of things
I have found you



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1 posted 2004-03-30 07:21 PM



Whether the sun is dawning
or twilight finds yawning...
there is always a gem
in the dew...

like this one.

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2 posted 2004-03-30 07:21 PM


Beautiful...and this was meant to be whispered, yes?
Lovely....
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

1slick_lady
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3 posted 2004-03-30 07:25 PM


"I rejoice that here
so near the end of things
I have found you"

so beautiful, just beautiful...h

Martie
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4 posted 2004-03-30 07:26 PM


Jamie

This poem is the treasure....it's beautiful!  

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5 posted 2004-03-30 08:11 PM


Enchantress mentioned :"Beautiful...and this was meant to be whispered, yes?"

and the lovely thing about her comment is that when i read this it was with whispered voice in my mind...i read it so softly...

enjoyed very much

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6 posted 2004-03-30 10:16 PM


This is simply a
   and I am keepin' it! Wonderful. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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7 posted 2004-03-31 03:59 AM


beautiful indeed
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8 posted 2004-03-31 01:01 PM


I rejoice that here
so near the end of things
I have found you

What a treasure this gentle beauty is!! *S* It makes me glad for PIP's library and the printer... for one read couldn't possibly be enough. *S*  

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9 posted 2004-03-31 01:03 PM


"I rejoice that here
so near the end of things
I have found you"

Exactly!!!

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10 posted 2004-03-31 03:37 PM


I rejoice that here
so near the end of things
I have found you


Perfect!

Maree


Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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11 posted 2004-03-31 04:03 PM


Very romantic!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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