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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-03-30 01:58 PM



Fire and Water


works hard
for his family

sweat days

sweet evenings

the scales are balanced.


©2004 Grover Gall

© Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-03-30 03:24 PM


I especially enjoyed the perspective here...a true celebration of the male mind.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-30 03:26 PM


Well done Grover...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-03-30 03:39 PM


Now, this is a certified
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-03-30 04:24 PM


Sounds good! Indeed the evenings are sweeter when the days are filled with true engagement.
Love, Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2004-03-30 05:07 PM


Yep, That's it....Wish it could be the end all....Good writing!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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