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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shared these secrets As come trembling from my heart That touched upon the wound you hide and cover Yet un-exposed, the chance to heal may lack discover We have said Spoken in our own way And I have always walked behind, awaited in a surface patience That truly was my own resolve to be there for you, inert sentience That what has been Should be the taking of your hand, with open heart, and active hear Take away material things I seek not wedding rings or poverty A friend in deed to hold you close, in loose a bond of sovereignty The body speaks To guide my steps in love it seeks Entrusted in your palms my heart, undoubtedly to fail and grow Without conflict to resolve that you would not believe or know Share these feelings Unafraid for I have never left you We may disagree and yet you see that honor is as honor does And still the linger of the Aspens quake as vividly as ever was We have been A knowing that is virginal and white Set apart and un-detained my heart has taken flight The need but your support and grace, the smile that gifts my face delight In all that hoped, along the moist regard implored to crackling fireplace Fingers swept of button down, concern that leaves the heart to burn within its trace Copyright Kkh 3/30/04 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some good images here, Kathleen. Great contrast in, "Take away material things I seek not wedding rings or poverty."  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The body speaks To guide my steps in love it seeks Entrusted in your palms my heart, undoubtedly to fail and grow Without conflict to resolve that you would not believe or know A very beautiful and touching write. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. of late, you have been writing such inspiring words that all of us could take from and grow endlessly. This poem is no exception. Exceptionally done!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned Kathleen.. such wonderful imagery. Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely written all the way through but I enjoyed this a little more than the rest. "Should be the taking of your hand, with open heart, and active hear Take away material things I seek not wedding rings or poverty A friend in deed to hold you close, in loose a bond of sovereignty" Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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