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Three Little Pigs
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Three Little Pigs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Three Little Pigs The story of three little pigs Who loved to wallow in the mud of digs? Until covered from Long John to Toe And lost the sight of what they know. And the last pig called Balladeer Was covered in mud from sight to ear And found that he could fling naïve By flinging mud by word conceive So each built houses all alone One of hay, one twigs, one stone To keep each other from condemn But the wolf was there inside of them There was no need to huff and puff The acid of mud dissolves all stuff And they were steeped in flotsams core Until they could carry no more I fear the day of the sour pun And friendly laughter turns to dun. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Okay you big bad wolf....LongJohn and Bally will write something awful about you yanno |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy this is just too cute! But, I'd duck if I were you... You know how those fellas can be. Enjoyed my morning giggle with you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Tis often seen in little boys' play how the mud hardens when flung, to clay and pelts can sting, we know the truth perhaps the answer is, uncouth? For if we laugh with hilarity at these boys' jocularity our laughter will turn to runnels of tear and keep the clay as mud, so we've no fear that these boys will hurt each other and hand in hand, concede, they're brothers. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Surely this poetry cannot be of me - as I write only pretty stuff about kitties and things. Oh sure, I might make 'Deer and Toe foils, but never disasterously (ahem). I'm sure they will agree, we are pretty immune to one another now - heh. BTW - Karilea - I ain't holding hands with 'Deer or Toe! *insert manly acting here* |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh boy, Sy, I think you've just thrown yourself to the wolves! hahaha! ~K~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You fear the day of the sour pun, Sy?? Obviously you haven't been reading Toerag's stuff!!  I try to keep these boys in line, Sy, but you know how it is. Everybody wants to enjoy the bacon but nobody wants to have to raise the pigs....so that duty has fallen to me, I suppose.  Thanks for such an insightful poem which is 66 2/3% accurate.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well well well, mother goose has certainly winked in your coffee this morning...hello Sy, good day to you and thanks for the read. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Hilarious! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you for the smiles, boys. So playful and cute. Love, Margherita |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Oh Sy. The bad boys of these pages of blue is goin' to get ya. For sure, for sure. Oh yes they are. Me thinks you should build a sturdy castle with a moat around it. Then fill with nasty critters so the bad boys can't get ya. Bon-Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, I'll think about that.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehehehe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thanks for the read. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Poor Sy, you realize what you have done don't you? LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey Yes, placed myself in the lions den. LOL |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
LOL Great fun....Hang on! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Thank you I will try. LOL |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
despite the fun all around deep down... is the wolf as bad ad the pigs that laughed and laughed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wordwizard One never knows. LOL |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
The three little pigs Didn't have it so bad. Each one had his own little pad. And unlike us, Each one knows, what happens to him when he goes. Each one knows that when they die, They're going to bake or smoke or fry. We've no idea what were going to be When we shake hands with eternity! Rene` |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
zippi Very true, enjoyed the comment. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wise words! lol  Loves 'n laughs, EA P.S. They ain't so "little"!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Ange, Glad you enjoyed. |
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