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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I wonder if he knows tonight? Tonight? He might suspect something-- he's worried in my pieces of not enough imaginings oh the hollow silence rings there where laughter used to be he knows the arches stinging me ringbrows (lord?) prohibiting damn my dull timidity trading lame for moment's peace-- "here's my queen, take game..." I beg disgust transparency gathering my cloak to neck knowing I'm exposed I beg and gather dust beneath my knees: Let me pray the nation, love? Let me speak a woman's peace. Let me show humility-- a girlchild begging on her knees just as mothers always did... Take my heart as my words bleed aching for the tones assuage the memories of ever was coiling home to always is-- take me as I am I'll give every bit of me I've got knowing that it's not enough every second that I live I urge me to become the more... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this...in my own way |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to always is-- take me as I am I'll give ~*~  |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I urge me to become the more... Yess, I believe you do...smiling at ya Gorgeous.  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
everyone urges me "not" to become any more.....it's kinda like cocaine....some guy said it enhances your personality...but, if you have a personality of a prick.....oh, you know the rest....woe is me.......liked the write gal...now let me go find another line.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You seek serenity? She lies beneath the winter snow, the spring tease and the summers breeze. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
two thumbs up |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great write, enjoyed! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Good write! I guess we all wish to become the more until we learn to love ourselves just as we are - it's just so hard getting there. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
a girlchild begging on her knees just as mothers always did... Karen, Karen, Karen.... hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you good poets, for reading my meanderings yet again. Yer all so good to me. (and Toe? lucky for me I know how to handle a "prick"--  )Yep. Just like that.  gawd-I-love-this-place... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Serenity your words always bring a little sanity to my world. Thank ya hon! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
amazing...and no one can say it better! ~~**~~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
ALL the more, friend witch. ALL the more... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I beg and gather dust beneath my knees:" hmmmmmmmmmm... Karen, I think someday you will realize that you already are more. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Not only more...but most of all. Awesome write! TD |
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