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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-03-29 05:39 PM



Its only passion
A need deep within the soul
To live
Happy, free, complete, and full, and alive
To give to another
And recieve by giving

The thorns sit waiting, watching, mocking jealously
Amused by it
Like a spot of blood marked central to a pearl house

Tear it open
See whats inside
Passionately wrapped tightly comfort lack of feelings
Numb
Rip it, shread it, crush it,
Dying

Soul colored rusty and vile dirt
Her system of rank
Wobbly with laughter
Tear some more
Its not quite dead

Radiance .2 inch diameter sweating bloody red
Sweet loving caring peace of mind
Stationary hope
Desire dropped incent passing through from this shell containing my soul and heart
Coming home to either an eternal female with tickled vertebrae juicy with flames
Or to GATES higher than my limits of sight.

I've become an army of one with no weapons or shields
No skills or training
But with plenty of use

The filth of being a whore

[I appreciate your concern, you'll always stink and burn.]-Kurt Cobain

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-03-29 05:53 PM


Well, this is an interesting poem with a surprise ending...
River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2004-04-13 03:56 PM


well i read this twice and i think i understand what your talking about but i'm not exactly sure... "Coming home to either an eternal female with tickled vertebrae juicy with flames"   ...that's a colorful line. maybe you could e-mail me and explain? (feels dumb and confuzzled) lol, take care.

     - Bonnie Sue

sleep my precious slumber

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