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who can argue against it?
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who can argue against it? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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aplogies beforehand...sigh...am attempting to glue them to paper to keep them from haunting me ...rough days these are... who can argue against it? tiptoeing the words they find different ways to hush an entrance and then they Pounce the finale is the same it never changes small and inconspicuous but surely uninvited they sit daily in the seat beside me over a million miles it has run through my head it never changes despite the radio on or off they only know one chorus they sing loudly and... it never changes like a thief least expected they steal in close and run off with my voice succinctly followed by tear drop after tear drop charge them with inhuman cruelty I should but the Judge is Death and the sentence never changes who can argue against it? Chris is dead Chris is dead, they said |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah girl, I wish I had the power to turn it all around for you... You know I'm here if you want to touch.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, lady... I ache so for you... wish I could change those words into happier ones... Instead I'm speechless with only hugs to offer.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you sunshine lady...and yep I know, its just that no matter how I try it never changes...and somedays are really hard to get through........sigh oh my friend, I know, my quiet tries to hide it so as not to worry you, but when the volume gets to mach ten, I have to get it out.....love you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A real sadness. I pray for you, friend! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I ache for you, too, Karon. You are such a fine person. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetJelly~ I cry for you, for your loss, for the time that never seens to come when there won't be tears~ Tears dilute the sorrow .... so welcome them my dear~ I love you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You just wrote me to silence. This captures the gravity, the confusion, edged with anger and shock, and the disbelief of irreversible loss. Hugs, jb. damn... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the hurt just hurts so much when i read you, but when i came to the last lines...the name "Chris"...the tears began to flow and flow.... I know..I know... what i would give to ease your pain  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Me too... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello jellybeans. SIGH! This tears my heart out. So sad dear friend. Know you are in my thoughts. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you...thank you for accepting my sadness with such comfort.......thank you for being my friends |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Had this one libraried...and am so proud to see how you have come so very far... |
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