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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-03-29 01:58 PM


endless skies
sunny days
star-filled nights
moonlit rays
all too true
to be real
from within
is how you feel

darkened skies
heavy days
lonely nights
empty rays
from within
passing years
drowning in
a rain of tears

cloudy skies
lost in ways
losing fights
hiding praise
in one's mind
you find heart
pit of fruit
the seed apart

crying skies
restless days
sleepless nights
in this maze
from within
free the fears
releasing in
a rain of tears

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-03-29 02:43 PM


awesome! You are growing!
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
2 posted 2004-03-29 03:05 PM


Very well crafted!
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-29 03:21 PM


Excellent, well-written!
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