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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
I must rid myself of this hole Grasping on for tedium, less fearful then you know Oh, this reality? challenging your crippled soul But I am not alone In this Disturbance you have caused here Just like the tornado that picked you up, spun them around, and threw me to the ground Your guidance has betrayed us now You brought us on this spiraling odyssey Introduced as a child You took a while A wild guess at this Child I let the light run through me As he Tried to change me This bandage that we Must not use helplessly Let this light in And feel this dinge Feel free from this heritage Of this unpredictable Take the light out and shout Why must we look at your intuition? Your silly supposition? I'm locked in this position Forget your helpless tradition I have given up on your decision You too have changed for this supposition Feel the light out Forget the light is in Let these moths in This refraction |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ben~ You pen really well ...~ I like this line a whole bunch-a-lot - 'I let the light run through me'  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
interesting. "i must rid myself of this hole." i know what you speak of. i'm there with you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed!  |
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