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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-03-29 12:22 PM




every day he takes me
to his place called denial
a land of deceit
a battle not worthwhile
a place where
only lies grow
sounds that no other
should know
where he
is strong
where he
claims no wrong
even the
strongest love
is given
a lies shove
no place to run
no where to hide
when he takes you
to denial
his land of false pride


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1 posted 2004-03-29 01:09 AM


hmm, and here i thought i was the only one who the knew this "land"  :-)


well said!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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2 posted 2004-03-29 02:25 AM


  Sad.....  
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3 posted 2004-03-29 04:12 AM


they are quite good at schmoozing, aren't they?
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4 posted 2004-03-29 10:24 AM


oh yes they are.   thanks for replies    


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5 posted 2004-03-29 11:51 AM


Marsha, you express yourself very well. Your poems are now much better-- very well polished and well-written. I think this poem is excellent!
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6 posted 2004-03-29 12:07 PM


MGROVES
A good strong write, enjoyed.


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7 posted 2004-03-29 01:31 PM


Very well said. Enjoyed this. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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8 posted 2004-04-02 11:48 PM


Interesting.
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thankyou  all for you replies
      


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