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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28
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0 posted 2004-03-28 08:38 PM



Come consume me
Levitate my wish
and focus on my desires
to feel hopeful
and weave in the fire
To swallow whole
The creature of the sleeping
weeping like infidelity
The breathing calm
of insanity

I wish there were another phantom
to fathom this horrific desire
The snakes venom
casts your aspire

Another wants to know
how to dream and to feel,
why to live and to heal,
what to tell and to steal,
who to kill and to conceal,
when to leave and to bear

Broken now
Alone in this hopeless
but allowed to feel whole
unbearable, lifeless
to bear this again
is to give in to
nothing that you can't understand
so just give in and take this away
your will is not enough
for this vampire standing in the way

© Copyright 2004 Ben - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-28 08:42 PM


loved this


ChemicalRepose
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2 posted 2004-03-28 08:44 PM


Thank you.
EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2004-03-29 04:27 PM


vampire? uh oh.

i thought vampires didn't exist! (heh heh)

hmm.. yes..

well conveyed. good luck to you sir

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Grover
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4 posted 2004-03-29 05:58 PM


Unusual theme.
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