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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-03-28 03:41 PM


Crawling within,
going underneath the skin
reveals the pain,
the fight to gain.

Self.

Step away from your mirrored self,
see what else is on the shelf.

Perspective.

Points of sunlight gleem
within fragmented beams,
and rainbows can follow pain
as easily as rain.

Step away from
Self.

See who else
you may be.


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-28 03:54 PM


Kacy -- As you just read in mine, I'm working on it!  Great poem!       ....jo
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2 posted 2004-03-28 04:00 PM


Glad that you connected with this one, Iliana. So, does this mean I'm not alone on that shelf?

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3 posted 2004-03-28 04:01 PM


Step away from
Self.

See who else
you may be.


I've had a lil peak, and I'm almost there.

Enjoyed

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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4 posted 2004-03-28 04:06 PM


Maree, OK, does this mean you're going to show yourself more often? LOL, hope so. Thanks for the visit.
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5 posted 2004-03-28 04:48 PM


Kacy, your journey has been so good, so rejuvenating for you.  Thanks for sharing it with us.  I love this write.  ~K~
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6 posted 2004-03-28 05:07 PM


This is very interesting, and enjoyable to read.
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7 posted 2004-03-28 05:30 PM


great thoughts!
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8 posted 2004-03-28 05:33 PM


Kahlil, thank you!
Chem, thanks, and again, welcome.
Dixie, thanks for reading!

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9 posted 2004-03-28 06:49 PM


Kacy~

AMEN !!!

This is spot on !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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10 posted 2004-03-28 09:13 PM


i'll see if i can try this
and if it works, i'll make sure to send you a hug

enjoyed this very much!

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11 posted 2004-03-28 09:30 PM


Good uplifting write.Truly enjoyed and understand...

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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12 posted 2004-03-28 09:50 PM


smiling a thank you
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