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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-03-28 10:58 AM



Bats scatter from the ruined church
As the first shell strikes.

Bugles sound..
Ladders everywhere
As a handful of men
Try to defend the indefensible.
Two hundred fifty
Against three thousand.

A sixty minute assault ends
With pools of black blood
Beside a fur hat...
A huge knife stuck defiantly
In a sickroom wall.

The cold March wind
Made warm by the funeral pyres.


© Copyright 2004 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-28 11:00 AM



Where've you been, Larry?
It's good to see you here.

Remembering...
funny, how the chimes are sounding just now.

Thank you.

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-28 11:38 AM


Great imagery... is there more to the story?
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3 posted 2004-03-28 06:03 PM


Larry~

March 6, 1836 ... "Remember the Alamo".

EXCELLENT, sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-03-29 02:25 PM


Living where I do, forgetting isn't an option. *S* I like this vivid remembrance very much!
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5 posted 2004-03-29 02:58 PM


There will always be some fights which must be fought.  That was one of them.

Excellent work!

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6 posted 2004-03-29 02:58 PM


Incredible bravery can not be forgotten;
Thank you dingusjr, for bringing history
forward through your well written poem.
                    Sadie

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