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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-03-28 12:15 PM




Regarding periwinkle

never have i come across
such complimentary color
to the skyward flight
of the albatross

this hue i've read of
setting sail
on poetic pages
from shore to shore
letters of love embossed

this baby swaddled
in paper wrapping
snuggly boxed in
64 crayolas tossed

on the sky of chiffon
draped in this
purpled gloss

to the rush hour world
it brings a pause

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Copperbell
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1 posted 2004-03-28 12:19 PM


the little things that make us pause - I like this
iliana
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2 posted 2004-03-28 01:22 AM


Inked -- can't wait to read the next color!  Beautiful coloring!   ......jo
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-28 03:57 AM


beautiful!
bklynboy
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4 posted 2004-03-28 07:38 AM


Damn good!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-03-28 07:46 AM


inkedgoddess
A welcome read, enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-03-28 11:37 AM


thanks for reading me
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7 posted 2004-03-28 06:05 PM


InkyOne~
OH ... I LOVE IT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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