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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-03-27 10:15 PM



The young girls stand in line
Each with one hip cocked out.
Standing on their long, long legs
Like exotic birds wading in shallow waters.

Their red mouths flutter
Like tropical butterflies
After a long migration.

They talk about their boobs and boys..
Which, when you think about it
Is the same conversation
Young men are having
On the other side of the room.

The guys amble over
Like so many lean hounds
Trying not to show the hunger in their eyes.


[This message has been edited by dingusjr (03-28-2004 11:16 AM).]

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-27 10:26 PM


Another good one!
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2 posted 2004-03-27 11:42 PM


hunting season at the movies eh?
enjoyed this one too

iliana
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3 posted 2004-03-28 01:44 AM


Keen observations, well written and giving us women insight!  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-03-28 11:12 AM


Hey you..."man" - "many"....

how you brought back to mind
the sock hops...


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5 posted 2004-03-29 02:21 PM


Sharp observations presented so well... I like this! *S*
Martie
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6 posted 2004-03-29 02:23 PM


You see so well!  Loved this!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-03-30 06:31 PM


Girl watcher huh...at the movies, at the mall, at the beach...me too...like this...James
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8 posted 2004-03-30 07:09 PM


Ow, guilty as charged! I have been one of them dawgs......

Nicely caught, my friend -- I can absolutely see them!

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9 posted 2004-03-30 08:45 PM


Heh heh....enjoyed the images here!
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

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