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Ludo
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0 posted 2004-03-27 02:04 PM



Spring Rain

All I want is to dance with you,
in the beautiful spring rain.

Pretty watercolour paintings,
show the scene that I long for.
To be with you.

Mist,
softly stroking your face;
my arms around you,
yours in return,
locked in a warm embrace.

© Copyright 2004 Ludo - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-27 02:11 PM


very soft and touching write...enjoyed
Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-27 03:13 PM


Very nice write, enjoyed!
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3 posted 2004-03-28 12:19 PM


romantic
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4 posted 2004-03-28 12:44 PM


Nice, warm and romantic writing!  
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5 posted 2004-03-28 12:53 PM


I enjoyed this loving write...  ~K~
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6 posted 2004-03-28 09:46 PM


Ludo~
Very tenderly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ludo
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7 posted 2004-03-29 01:18 PM


thank you so much for your positive words. )
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