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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-27 09:05 AM



Three months or four
nothing more, a discussion
not really wanting to share.

Back and forth
talking about worth and to whom
and what, final plans of care.

Exhausting her body,
exhausting this mind, knowing
tomorrow alone I will be.

Three months or four
pretending there's more, walking
in darkness not wanting to see.

Not wanting to follow
to walking the slope, the downhill
of living, the stopping of flow.

Three months or four
too short needing more, a Springtime of pain,
and a loss, in the know.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2004-03-27 09:24 AM


Maureen~
I hold your sister and your family in prayer vigil~
This piece is from a breaking heart ...
and you share that so tenderly~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-03-27 10:00 AM



i send my best to you

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2004-03-27 10:07 AM


As difficult these times are ....
       a warming smile shared can sometimes ease such pain.

             *SSS *SSSS *SSS *SSSS *SSS

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-03-27 12:42 PM


I used to think it was better to know, now I wonder.

My heart goes out to you M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-03-27 01:14 PM


Holding your sister and you in my thoughts and prayers.
Heart Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

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