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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-03-27 07:13 AM


Upon the Sea

She waits me there upon the sea
Infinites Sea of vanity
She does the dance of seven veils
Billowing each my seven sails.

For I am caught within the wile
Within the filigree of guile
And will not leave my fantasy
Nor question on its sanity

I love my world of rainbow roads
Where princes live in dreams as toads
And kissing is the key to bear
The magic of the self-aware

Each night I sail the bale anew
Each night I stew the new of coup
And on this rainbow of delight
I spend the wonders of the night

Its only day that ages me
The mundane and the ennui



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Kicking Kim
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1 posted 2004-03-27 07:19 AM


"I love my world of rainbow roads"

I really took a liking to this line
It had a certain power to it
and depicted your optimism on life!

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

I thoroughly enjoyed this read
I enjoy your style!

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

scorpio
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2 posted 2004-03-27 07:27 AM


A sail on a moon lit night is indeed an experience Sy.  Serenely beautiful poem.

believe in what your heart feels...

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3 posted 2004-03-27 07:34 AM


A very fine write as usual Sey...

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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4 posted 2004-03-27 07:41 AM



I can smell the salt in the air, Sy...
a lovely lovely...a flight to sky...
Good morning, you...tea?


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5 posted 2004-03-27 09:00 AM


Beautiful morning read m'friend.
I see Sunshine has taken care of your tea.
Then how bout a kiss and hug from me?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

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6 posted 2004-03-27 09:22 AM


Seymour~
What a beautiful morning greet~
Nobody ... but nobody, works the words like you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-03-27 09:28 AM


"Its only day that ages me
The mundane and the ennui"

a beautiful dream with the last two lines really hitting home with me

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8 posted 2004-03-27 09:41 AM


She does the dance of seven veils
Billowing each my seven sails.

For I am caught within the wile
Within the filigree of guile
And will not leave my fantasy
Nor question on its sanity

I love my world of rainbow roads
Where princes live in dreams as toads
And kissing is the key to bear
The magic of the self-aware

Each night I sail the bale anew
Each night I stew the new of coup
And on this rainbow of delight
I spend the wonders of the night

Its only day that ages me
The mundane and the ennui

====================================


Just think what you could do in Alaska's six month season of night????   LOL


Sybabers you make me smile with all these couplets of clever and cool...
gotta love this one.....


She does the dance of seven veils
Billowing each my seven sails.


and then there is these two lines of poetic delight....


Where princes live in dreams as toads
And kissing is the key to bear


youre no toad...but you Randy still get kisses! lol

     


*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-03-27 11:23 AM


Kimberley,
And I enjoyed your reply.

Thank you scorpio

Goldenrose
Thank you dear.

Sunshine
Tea and sympathy?

Nancy,
And a and hug back.

Marge,
Huglets back my love.

muted,
Enjoyed your reply.

JM,
Alaska, that's where it came to me. I spent
about three years there. LOL
Thank you Tink WWRS



passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-03-27 12:49 PM


*sigh*
Sunshine
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11 posted 2004-03-27 12:53 PM



Ok, m'dear, just for you,
a sip of sympathy

inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2004-03-27 02:42 PM


merrily merrily merrily merrily
your poetry is but a dream

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-03-27 03:28 PM


passing,
Thank you dear.

Sunshine,


inkedgoddess
Cute, thank you.

Suetang
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14 posted 2004-03-27 04:53 PM


Another great write, Seymour which was very much enjoyed.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-03-27 04:58 PM


Sue,
Thank you for the read and nice reply.

Dark Angel
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16 posted 2004-03-27 06:52 PM


Aye Capt' Sey Mour... A delightful read   Enjoyed very much.

Maree  


Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2004-03-27 07:11 PM


Dark Angel
My joy you enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-03-28 09:47 AM


Good Sunday morning hugs, Sir T!

"Its only day that ages me
The mundane and the ennui"

~ I gather from your exceptionally young spirit, that you have had far more nights, than you have had days, in your illustrious life! ~ and those nights must have been far from mundane!


EA



Margherita
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19 posted 2004-03-28 09:52 AM


And on this rainbow of delight
I spend the wonders of the night



Hello, Prince of rainbow roads, you shine!

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-03-28 10:00 AM


Earth Angel
If you count my nights of dreaming , you are right.

Margherita
For a second I read Prince of rainbow toads.
LOL

MGROVES
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21 posted 2004-03-28 10:53 AM


enchanted  loved this!


Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2004-03-28 11:42 AM


Thank you MGROVES

Grover
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23 posted 2004-03-28 12:04 PM


Very well crafted... an extremely good write. Example of fine talent-- gifted poet!
Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2004-03-28 12:24 PM


Grover
You flatter me. LOL Thank you

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