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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-26 08:09 PM





April will Fool

Snow, to fly again
Brisk Kansa winds soon blowing
White pear petals soar


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-03-26 08:16 PM


Yeah..she's good at doing that isn't she Bella?

This is lovely

M.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-03-26 08:45 PM


Never can predict!
  Enjoyed this.
             ~Sadie

iliana
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3 posted 2004-03-26 08:47 PM


White pear petals soaring --- loved that line, Sunshine!  

[This message has been edited by iliana (03-27-2004 12:28 AM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-03-26 09:09 PM


No..not  more snow!
Lovely write sweet lady~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

ethome
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5 posted 2004-03-26 09:12 PM


This is a very insightful work but I'm afraid I must insist that it be banned in Canada!!!!!

It'll do well in the velvet poet underground.  Just kidding!

You know me?

Eric

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Twilight's Orchestra
6 posted 2004-03-27 12:25 PM


always take a bit of the (very large)
fool inside to fall for Spring Almost

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-03-27 04:22 AM


beautifully done!
kayjay
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Oregon
8 posted 2004-03-27 08:24 AM


All seasons would come in more happily with welcoming words like yours.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Bonnie j
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9 posted 2004-03-27 08:56 AM


Nature does have a bag of tricks to play on us each year.
Sunshine and rain, snow and ice, high winds
knocking branches to the ground while a tiny sparrow plays in quiet bushes.
Good one Sunshine.
Love
Bon-Bon

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