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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-03-26 02:00 PM


(This is kind of a cute, sappy love song I wrote yay! )

Love Is What You Live For
By: Noah Eaton
3/26/04

(Intro Solo)

(verse 1: chords with acoustic)

Loves first tears are always the warmest,
and your youthful smile made the cherry blossoms bloom,
I had nowhere else to run, there's no turning back,
so I came running to the essence of you.
A solstice flush grazed my face, we were lighter-than-air,
I felt beautifully horrified I found an angel in a field of strangers,
I felt so happy I couldn't stop crying,
the journey was complete, faith led us through all the danger.

(Pre-Chorus: Electric)

This moment was written in the stars,
our dove song was a Manifest Destiny,
and there you were promising me...

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Love is what you live for,
never let it run away,
when you hold me I feel my heart soar,
you take my breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(repeat intro riff)
(verse 2: chords with acoustic)

I felt so light-headed holding your hand,
light adaptation became a religion to me,
Kneeling with you speaking the Paternoster together,
your sunshine song brings my every prayer melody.

(Pre-Chorus: Electric)

And you feel deep within my anatomy,
you see, you touch, you believe everything you see,
you appreciate every part of me...

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Love is what you live for,
never let it run away,
when you hold me I feel my heart soar,
you take my breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(solo)

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Love is what you live for,
never let it run away,
when I hold you do you feel your heart soar,
taking your breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(riff and chords continue playing)

Ooooohhh,
ooooohhh!

(acoustic outro)


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-26 02:30 PM


It is a lovely poem

but no-one would listen to the song

unless you made it classical

Warm tears

Shrieking to the world

Love

Running

Never no more tears on my back

wanting your path

(Pre-Chorus: Electric)

This moment was written in the stars,
our dove song was a Manifest Destiny,
and there you were promising me...

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Magic you promised you

Magic me

Dancing when you hold me I feel my heart soar,
you take my breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(repeat intro riff)
(verse 2: chords with acoustic)

Love sings

A church
Dancing your image

I dance

(Pre-Chorus: Electric)

And you feel deep within me,
you see, you touch, you believe

you see,
you appreciate every part of me...

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Love is what you live for,
never let it run away,
when you hold me I feel my heart soar,
you take my breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(solo)

(Chorus: Riff 1 with electric & chords)

Love is what you live for,
never let it run away,
when I hold you do you feel your heart soar,
taking your breath away,
love is what you live for,
nurture it today...

(riff and chords continue playing)

Ooooohhh,
ooooohhh!

(acoustic outro)
You give all the stick you want for changing this

dave

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2 posted 2004-03-26 02:58 PM


A beautiful poem, Noah!
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3 posted 2004-03-26 03:19 PM


Just lovely Noah my friend. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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4 posted 2004-03-26 03:25 PM


Wonderful song and poem Noah..

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2004-03-26 04:37 PM


liked this song
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6 posted 2004-03-27 09:24 AM


Noah - This is absolutely the best I've seen.  Enjoyed.  
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7 posted 2004-03-27 10:19 AM


Noah

        ..... AMEN ....

                          Keep it as YOU feel it, brother.

                                          *S

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8 posted 2004-03-27 04:14 PM


Great writing here Noah.  I hope all is well with you my friend.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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9 posted 2004-03-27 07:23 PM


Noah,

Wish I could hear it! I can only imagine.

Enjoyed

E

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10 posted 2004-03-28 12:12 PM


sing it loud!
your heart sings beautifully Noah

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11 posted 2004-03-28 12:48 PM


What a great song Noah

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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12 posted 2004-03-28 01:09 AM


Noah, I loved the innocence of first love that came through with this.  It was so sweet!   .....jo
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13 posted 2004-04-07 02:37 AM


Noah, this is so incredibly sweet, fresh, and beautiful! I want this kind of love for you! ~ and she will be one lucky young lady!

I love your humongous, sensitive heart!


Your friend,
Linda

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14 posted 2004-04-07 07:29 PM


Very nice...James
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15 posted 2004-04-11 08:34 PM


nice write
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