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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-03-26 01:43 PM


Gentle lift
Changing your spirit
Eyes black
Saying I dont want my song, sung
I dont want you to make my destiny

Later we spoke

You did this to me
I was happy
You did this to me

No I have never  done anything

I have stayed away

I have never done more to stand from a distance and watch

I have never made you be more than you

What happens now

Nothing

I had no involvement in you

I have merely stayed

For something

You can see the sun
You can walk down a hill
You can

It is easy to ask me
Why I permitted you

Looking into eyes

I will bear the cost
For I can not say no

Ask me

For the grant to ease a pain
I can never bear

and will someday face

dave

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-03-26 01:48 PM


Bravo!
The gate is open poet.
TD

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california
2 posted 2004-03-26 02:23 PM


excellant!


Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-26 03:09 PM


Enjoyed this great write, Dave. You've a way with words!
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
4 posted 2004-03-26 09:50 PM


the sun boucnes on the sea
very perceptive here

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