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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-26 01:29 PM



On the dance floor
Stuck like a midgit
Legs moving like

The

Neck like a camel
Looking for water
Been a long trip

Hustlers on the pockets
Wear do you wear
Your ideas

Coat to the DJs
Ice smoke
Coming around you

Thrilling dancing

For a moment

The Man


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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-26 01:31 PM


This is about someone

Who thinks they

are something

Inspired by someone who is

but of someone

who feels they are

Usual bunch

Dave

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2004-03-26 01:36 PM


You waltz man .... with words! You certainly do not lack ideas, they are in the right place no doubt.
Love, Margherita



ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
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3 posted 2004-03-26 01:38 PM


I saw the ego in a man's image, released before all eyes...and watched the courageous stride he took as he shed his inhibitions and became the art and music at his core.
TD

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-26 02:11 PM


Margherita, TD

Sweethearts

It is alright for you bunch

I spin on a floor and look a fool

You look

Something

to look at

and who looks at me

Dave

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-03-26 04:39 PM


You just keep on keepin' on, eh Dave?... very imaginative write. Enjoyed!
ethome
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6 posted 2004-03-26 06:28 PM


Good explanation...
I like the piece!

Eric

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-03-26 06:30 PM


This piece
dances
down
the
page
Dave..
I
like.

Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-03-26 08:40 PM


Grover


I've never own'ed anything in my life

Picture for tonight "Chitty Bang Bang or Lady and the Tramp" and I mean watching them

Thanks Eric

I require your words as quality

Enchantress

Mix your potions over those

who need to run up and down pirate ships

maybe I watch "Peter Pan" instead.

Thanks for your ideas and thoughts and words

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
9 posted 2004-03-26 09:45 PM


We should all watch the old Disney movie more!  The neck on the camel gave this one away!   jo
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