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Faux You
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Faux You |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Faux You I allude to the stupidity Of a return to the insanity That led to this condition To begin with. Like a bottle and resulting run, I’m not sure I could take the fun, Though it seem’s a good idea In my weakness. Then a slap back to reality, The nonexistance of what I believed to be, The illusion that I must let fade away, To end the loneliness that haunts me everyday And the nonsense of hurting Because I choose to. Live like it's your last day... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"And the nonsense of hurting Because I choose to."  really good writing here  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
bb An old subject, but done in a refreshing manner...good poetry... enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Such a sad subject! But well written... heartbeat heard. I agree with ice's reply. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thanks all...appreciate your thoughts. Live like it's your last day... |
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