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lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-03-24 10:45 PM


Rub myself into oblivion
To the night, I'm givin' in
Sighed myself to sleep again
Cried to my heart to stop the sin

Talk, walk and moan
Breathe, bake, and bone

Strum on the strings
Feel all kinds of things
How your voice sounds
       when it sings.
Your guitar screams
           it rings.

Rub myself into oblivion
To the night I'm givin' in

talk is cheap
and she's a creep

"...Come on baby light my fire..."
Baby, you're the one I desire
Talk, walk and moan
Breate, bake, and bone

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

© Copyright 2004 steph - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-03-24 11:07 PM


Awesome write. I loved the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-03-25 12:17 PM


Wow, bold poem.  I loved that song!
DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-26 06:37 PM


Your words would the fire

And I suppose Agents
Would light the rest

Your words are good

Best of luck

Dave

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2004-03-26 06:45 PM


All you need is love love love
Love is all you need...
There's nothin you can say that can't be sung.....


It's easy......


I really enjoyed this little trip you took me on in this piece....

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-03-27 04:25 AM


neat piece
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