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Temp Vacation
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Temp Vacation |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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kiss me so sweet sing me to sleep with your sweet words of aspirations take me on a temporary vacation invite me up to your bedroom so we can snuggle some more shut the door tight lock it up and maybe the morning will never dawn on us. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this made me smile... I could use a temp vacation! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
BOOMING with soul ....and heart now you have hit the nail right on it's head lol Great Write its a shame nobody has noticed it hiding in the pages of pip keep it going -wolfman |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I just noticed! Love it. Ah, yes. Great title, idea, great write! Clever ending. Sadie |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice talent Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you everyone  |
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