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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-03-24 05:08 AM



Chapters Of Happy Memories

I view two sides of the story
On each page I go through
I read through the chapters
Happenings of me and you

In the beginning of the story
It was the opening of hearts
Imaginations added fantasy
You and I played many parts

Thoughts grew on the pages
As the chapters progressed
In stimulating conversations
We each lovingly expressed

Travelling many destinations
On every page we combined
As the story kept on growing
Where thoughts fed the mind

We became the continuation
Like minds blended together
Our hearts following the flow
On each romantic endeavour

Chapters of happy memories
Each page lovingly designed
Written over the many stages
As we met in heart and mind

HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-03-24 05:13 AM


Very good writing...enjoyed..

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

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Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-24 10:43 AM


Excellent!
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3 posted 2004-03-24 01:36 PM


beautiful!


DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-24 03:25 PM


Hope

Your words echo

As words of quality

Dave

ethome
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5 posted 2004-03-24 05:54 PM


Very well done...

"Chapters of happy memories
Each page lovingly designed
Written over the many stages
As we met in heart and mind"

That's very warm and full of feeling.

Eric

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Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Kristabell
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6 posted 2004-03-24 08:03 PM


Very lovely.
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7 posted 2004-03-24 08:25 PM


very nice
iliana
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8 posted 2004-03-26 02:22 AM


A book worth the read!  Enjoyed this.
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-03-26 03:59 AM


you know we write the same story
HopeS
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10 posted 2004-03-26 04:10 AM


Thank you all for your caring , kind responses , it so much appreciated
Hey dixie ... our life is a never ending story , lets hope we can both flow into happy new chapters

Hope

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