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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-03-24 02:19 AM



pull my hair back and
scream to myself the love
is going the love is gone

you enter my life and come
out of it so easy soon i fear
something will finally tear

my heart sores when im around
your touch my lips long for your
sultry kisses.

your tender hand the caring
eyes the way you say my name
oh say my name over again

i feel like a princess in
an enchanted garden the roses
smells sweet untill i get prick
by those thorns of sorrow and
bemusment

i lay my head in my hands and
cry this life of mine isnt fair
nor gives me any time.

unedited versio

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-24 10:50 AM



ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2004-03-24 11:19 AM


Sometimes raw is the heart's way ...

        this is fresh from your garden and
            has much strength to live.

    

                              *S

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-03-24 01:28 PM


Julie~
Your heartfelt thoughts are heard clearly in the voice of this poem~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-03-24 02:53 PM


enjoyed reading this, my heart reaches out to you as my soul embraces


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