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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-23 03:01 PM


Working through
A life
We never planned
And never achieved

Mind's joining understanding

Caring

Understanding

We live

dave

© Copyright 2004 Dave Page - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2004-03-23 03:09 PM


Think you've nailed it, my man...very good.

jwesley

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-03-23 03:15 PM


bulls eye...magnificant!
ParisGrl
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3 posted 2004-03-23 04:00 PM


Dave,

This is a great piece.  I enjoyed it!

~Laura~

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-23 06:22 PM


jwesley

Let me know when I understand it JW

Dave

LeeJ

Lee

My usual meanderings

Paris

In the springtime

Thanks Paris

Dave




Martie
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5 posted 2004-03-23 07:36 PM


Dave

Understanding can be a map to the future.  Enjoyed this!

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-03-23 10:01 PM


somtimes you just gotta make lemonaide, right? davey?
Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-03-23 10:32 PM


Excellent Dave...right on!!
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

iliana
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8 posted 2004-03-24 01:18 AM


true, oh so.  
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-03-24 02:26 AM


good one
HopeS
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10 posted 2004-03-24 05:07 AM


Right on Dave !!! Thats life
Hope

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