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SunShineStace New Member
since 2002-06-12
Posts 7MI, US |
Why do I take to heart everything you say? Why does your smile have to brighten up my day? Why do things seem different when they come from you? How do you make me smile, yet want to cry too? What is it about you that makes me share it all? How can I rely on you to catch me when I fall? How is it that your eyes hold the power of your soul? How is it, no matter what, that you never lose control? Now I drift off into dreams Where things are no more than what they seem But in my head continues the game Is it wrong to love you when you'll never feel the same? |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
and you are in love my sweet with words that seem somehow different dave |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
It is never "wrong" my friend, to love someone . . . but sometimes it's fruitless and better to guide your emotions elsewhere. jwesley |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Love is both the honeycomb and the bee sting. Thanks for sharing!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
years ago I would have said it's not wrong now I'm just bitter tomorrow I will say go ahead and love |
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SunShineStace New Member
since 2002-06-12
Posts 7MI, US |
It really is horrible and great at the same time. With the way he and I are, I don't see us growing anything but closer, however as of now I sit and watch him get closer, day by day, to falling in love with another. I'm happy for him of course, because I want nothing more for him to be happy with the one he loves, but I can't but wish that someday I'll be the one he ends up falling in love with for good. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i reall liked this hope you get your hearts desire. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice write...you have captured the paradoxical nature of relationships well |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions! Your first poem certainly fits well on the blue pages! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The same old question ...should you follow your heart , or follow your mind ??? Hope |
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