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Take Not This (A Snow & EvocativeVerse2 Duet)

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EvocativeVerse2
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Take Not This

it's the twist and bend;
the sight without
seeing ... where
you were the beat
one heart-breath away.
where blue is a dream
on the soul-stamp of forgiven.
coiled empathy melds into acquiescence.
impetuous need directs intent.
wantonly I pull you to the floor
mouth pressed to the, "you," of now.
...
Morpheus--take not this deception.
It's mine to dispute.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-23-2004 03:03 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

BRAVO!
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2 posted 03-23-2004 03:05 AM       View Profile for Sadelite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sadelite

Ditto!
                 Sadie
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain


3 posted 03-23-2004 03:08 AM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow

i'm so glad you're back home!

thank you for writing with me.. what a pleasure it was!!! ((hugs))

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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4 posted 03-23-2004 03:12 AM       View Profile for EvocativeVerse2   Email EvocativeVerse2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EvocativeVerse2

Thank you Dixie and Sadie. Love to hear from you both. Thank you Snow..the pleasure was all mine. This really did turn out great. Glad to be home again.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


5 posted 03-23-2004 04:07 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

muchly enjoyed this
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Great job you 2.
This is wonderful
Welcome home my dear friend.

Ribbits and Ribbits

:-)
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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 03-23-2004 03:53 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

DANG!!!!  

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

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Wonderful melting!
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9 posted 03-24-2004 01:50 AM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow

thank you all so very much for the comments on this piece!


snow
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10 posted 07-05-2004 04:22 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Yes I do recall this one now!
Bout time for another don't ya think??
~Hugs to you both~
 
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