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One Wish
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One Wish |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
ouch...heart just shattered in pieces everywhere... If I could have just one wish it would be to turn back time to go back into the past to the days when you were mine If I could have just one wish it would be to be with you because I know in my heart my love is forever true If I could have just one wish it would be to be in your amrs to have you hold me, touch me, kiss me to keep my safe from harm If I could have just one wish the future is what I would see so I could know if someday soon you would be with me If I could hav just one wish if would be to read your mind so I could see how and why and see whats going on inside If I could have just one wish it would be to move on with my life because you were my one true love and you cut my heart like a knife If I could have just one wish it would be to foget all about you... for you see I can't live with myself knowing I'm not with you I used to smile when I said you were mine, now I can't even smile and say your name at the same time. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
whatever wish you settle on, i do hope it comes true....but if not...just know i enjoyed reading your thoughts  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that would be my wish too you are not alone |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Hi Bela, "Just tell me what you think" Ok, I'm not good at critique, but I'll try and give you a fair and balance report on my thoughts on this piece. I enjoyed it! WildPoet  |
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