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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-03-23 12:01 PM



Must one live alone to stay innocent?
wait until you depart, heaven sent
to find a tally of the apples you've eaten
and the guilty plans your mind has beaten.

A naive world connects to the innocent
the bliss of ignorance has its perfume scent
if you had to steal a loaf to survive
in desperation, was innocence contrived?

I too am in movement to a tranquil quarter
away from guilt filled life of the porter;
who totes bags around delux hotel lobbies,
perhaps innocence was just a faithful hobby...


© Copyright 2004 ecrivan



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1 posted 2004-03-23 01:10 AM


yes, perhaps
enjoyed pondering on this

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2 posted 2004-03-23 05:57 AM


Perhaps, but I hope not.
enjoyed
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wordwizard
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3 posted 2004-03-23 07:50 AM


There was a previous poem on a man called innocence...thanks for reading

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4 posted 2004-03-23 05:59 PM


and waiting to give tip

and receive one

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5 posted 2004-03-23 06:22 PM



I can get into more trouble just being by myself! lol My daughters keep me on the straight and narrow!

Innocence can also be a faithful friend! As usual, you got me to ponderin'! ~ and that's a good thing!

Springtime hugs 'n smiles,
EA

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6 posted 2004-03-23 07:10 PM


Very good. Sad though
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