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Open Poetry #31

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-03-22 11:15 PM

Snarling he ripped the vestment open
Exposing the wound still weeping
Expecting her sword drawn in stealth

And she gave him her heart

Copyright Kkh 3/21/04

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-22 11:20 PM

Gone with the wind-type passion here! Wow! Loved it!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-03-22 11:22 PM

Ahhh . . . wonderful this is!!!

jwesley

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-22 11:30 PM

oh, fiesty, but romantic

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-03-23 03:30 AM

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-03-23 03:32 AM

Loved this! What can I say? Loved this.
Sadie

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-03-23 09:26 AM

Oh..my...goodness! Love this! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-03-23 09:30 AM

By surprise, retreated with gasp
expecting to be handed at least, an asp,
but nay, she loomed, with only her heart

and a vow in vow, with an "always" dart.

~*~

I've been reading too many inspirational poems lately...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-03-23 10:04 AM

Zowie!!!

You wield a mighty powerful and passionate pen! lol

Springtime hugs,
EA

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2004-03-23 04:14 PM

Love it. So much said in so few lines.

SG

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

10 posted 2004-03-23 05:17 PM

Joined forever

Dave

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