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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-22 03:57 PM



What She Doesn’t See

She does not ever glimpse herself
even through the radiance in your eyes;
she cannot perceive that she could be
something of an enigmatic surprise.

She cannot ever envision the depths
to which you fall in plummet,
nor would she ever accept as true
that she helped you reach high summits;

She does not know that you see in her green eyes
(total devotion, loyalty, devoid of compromise)~
she would not ever believe herself to belong,
and be the very heart’s tune of a favored song.

She just feels fortunate, indeed
that to her you fly God speed,
and lay beside her every night
bringing to her passions light.


~*~ Repost, slightly revised, from
17 August 2000



Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-22 04:06 PM


Magic words

Dave

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2 posted 2004-03-22 04:14 PM


Beautiful with an ache of sadness Karilea.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

iliana
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3 posted 2004-03-22 05:44 PM


Karilea, what a dear, wonderfully written piece of work this is.  It is not often that any of us realize what we mean to others.  How fortunate we are!     .......jo
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4 posted 2004-03-22 11:12 PM


Page wonderful
Page bright
Hold my vision
This and every Night

HOTY
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"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

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