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When you flew vibrations
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When you flew vibrations |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Understanding understands your vibrations Echoing twanging twitching Masked within control Taught through aeons You dance a tight rope Tight between two egos Quivering And pausing to disconnect both ends You plummet To a scream of fire And fear as gravity Exerts it's pull On your minds To land In perhaps a deep hole Or perhaps You really flew Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exciting images Dave!  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
or perhaps... wow......great images.....great ending |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover, jellybeans On an image we dance Thanks for your words Dave |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So true ...its amazing what the mind can do Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like someones walking a fine line here |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dave, outstanding understanding and depth and dance!  ........jo |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
wow.... the title grabbed me! but the words ... the words wont let go. bravo! snow |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
HopeS We all think we can fly, we just never think about landing inkedgoddess But they did at least cut it Ink and apologies for my sense of humour, maybe they cut it too fine iliana Thanks Jo but honesty would probably point to the red wine Snow Maybe even taking the bull by the horns which was an underlying theme Thanks Dave |
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