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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-03-21 10:32 PM

sun
bows to
moon
crimson
the sky
succumbs
to ebony sea
stars are
abandonned
on blackboards
of melting ice
i kissed
the frozen
season, and
woke to the
crowning of
the spring
i bow
to thee
let the
world
exchange
vows as
freedom
rings a
beam of
light
around
luna's
flight
i see
you with
an unjaded
heart
where can
you be
when there
is a shadow
across
my soul
walk the
path with
me, bounce
on the
trampoline
sky, we hang
suspended on
tomorrow's
rising
we are the
fallen ones
left stranded
as luna's
stars,
fragile as
cloud wisps,
children
of the
first night

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-03-21 10:37 PM

Ironically, the fallen ones are the same ones who bounce back.

You go girlie~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-21 10:45 PM

gorgeous

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-21 10:52 PM

after reading this i just wanted to close my eyes to ponder the images, to get a better "look at them"...

very nice

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-03-21 10:57 PM

So full your heart, that it rains...
Happy Spring.
TD

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-03-22 12:39 PM

I want to bounce on the trampoline sky! Beautiful images here.. ~K~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-03-22 06:24 AM

thanks for the very nice words

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2004-03-22 06:29 AM

Enjoyed the ride on this read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-03-22 09:04 AM

...BEAUTIFUL!!...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-03-22 12:29 PM

thanks for looking in on me

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-03-22 04:54 PM

walk the
path with
me, bounce
on the
trampoline
sky, we hang
suspended on
tomorrow's
rising

Dear Michele, this is a very beautiful vision!

Love and hugs. Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2004-03-22 06:02 PM

Ink

in anger

Across a solar scream

You echo

stability

I'm sorry we wont ever meet

but we scream at the heavens

Dave

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

12 posted 2004-03-22 06:06 PM

Wonderful! Thank you.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-03-22 07:45 PM

thanks again guys and dolls

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

14 posted 2004-03-23 04:07 PM

Very nice. I know these children. Walked with them often. Love the visual display of words falling,
falling,

falling,

Well done.
SG

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