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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2004-03-21 09:54 PM




In soft glistening droplets
cascading so quietly down
clinging to the greenery
moisturizing the leaves
before hitting ground
Landing in puddles
on a sleeping lawn
awakening beauty
Spring in dawn~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-03-21 09:55 PM


Another keeper my dear!
Happy spring.
TD

jwesley
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2 posted 2004-03-21 09:56 PM


Ahh, spring has definitely come down here Marge...and just as you so wonderfully put it.

jwesley

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-03-21 10:56 PM


just gorgeous!
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4 posted 2004-03-22 12:12 PM


this is so tender and cheery, I love it!
~K~

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5 posted 2004-03-22 03:42 AM


lovely...beautifully done!
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6 posted 2004-03-22 04:13 AM


Dear Marge:  I can almost hear that rain dripping!  Two of our neighbors left for Florida on Saturday, thinking of all the sunshine they were going to soak up. Maybe that's not what they'll be "soaking up" after all!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2004-03-22 04:55 AM


Nice, Marge, Nice!
Betty
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8 posted 2004-03-22 08:19 AM


Marge this is just perfect for spring. I really like it.
Love ya,
Betty

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-03-22 08:22 AM


Marge,
You got the jump on spring. Lovely

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Canada eh.
10 posted 2004-03-22 08:33 AM


Beautiful Marge...Happy spring!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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11 posted 2004-03-22 07:54 PM


Beautiful, Marge.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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12 posted 2004-03-22 11:41 PM


My kind of sleepy morning, Marge!   ......jo
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