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Yet Destiny Knocks
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Yet Destiny Knocks |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Regalia of a purposeful façade Where laughter hides the truth Brevity holds back oceans Where we stand and where we lie Never to each other, only to ourselves Silence but a barrier to feeling Magician, but the cloak of majesty Quantifying crowned jewels Numb to what might ache…what might touch Kept simple and kept away Indifference stutters back another day Slam of door and deadlock…bolt defying key turn What could I say? But open every entrance that you exit While we gaze into each other’s hearts…you may cover your ears And know love always hears Copyright Kkh 3/21/04 |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Where we stand and where we lie Never to each other, only to ourselves Silence but a barrier to feeling" nodding my head *yes* to all of this, especially those lines above..very nice  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
loved the ending six or so line in particular, my friend, ejoyed pondering it all and hearing, seeing what you do. jwesley |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Swinging within an ethos of Misdirection Clouds wrapped To join Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wow! Speechless SG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"What could I say? But open every entrance that you exit While we gaze into each other’s hearts…you may cover your ears And know love always hears" Oh this is wonderful! And such a powerful closing...perfect! Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace ~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"What could I say? But open every entrance that you exit While we gaze into each other’s hearts…you may cover your ears And know love always hears" Great lines, TD.....loved these words. jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... your writing feels like satin sheets lady. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, this is very good! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'love always hears' I so enjoy the soft read of your writes~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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