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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Incredible Dawn..absolutely exquisite!! Brava! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh how this aches...beautifully expressed. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very, very nice Dawn. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...other than what enchantress said, I always think I know what I'm doing when I write, but when I read something this beautiful ... I Dream To Write That Way... jwesley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It was here, amongst the sentimental bramble that decorated my home, my heart; where all things sacred lay~ You had me smiling and wiping my eyes... A most lovely heart speak, Dawn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another beauty for my library! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes the empty pages so so sentimental in the sadness of these times in our lives |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Nancy~thank you so much, youre making me smile! Maree~ oh yes, it aches terribly, the kind that doesnt fade...thank you Chris~ and you are very very sweet..thank you jwesley~ oh my, what a huge compliment...thank you  Blues~ thank you for finding the smiles and the tears to share with me Dixie~ me in your library! well, thank you ms. shadows Inkedgoddess~ im happy to see you here, thank you for sharing this moment with me |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Well written. I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to the next poem by you. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
brilliantly written Dawn...a truly fantastic poem..much feeling and much emotion.... Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Dawn, this is just amazingly good in every way. I truly felt this, and you used just the right descriptions. Sandra |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I have no words...this touches the tears in me......and the trembles.... powerful write lady |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, I, too, felt the delicacy of this. Wonderfully written. Be well. Sadie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, muted -- oh, oh, oh........ Good write.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) This is soooooooo beautiful but also sad, dearest friend, I send angel hugs your way in hoping now all the silence has become serenity that hus gentle music to your ears of promises and joys, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Has a nice Victorian feel about it. Very nicely done |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful portrait of an anguished loss. You write so well kiddo. TD |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sadness most beautifully expressed ... I could sense the heart languish in silent sreams of anguish Hope |
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