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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-03-21 06:30 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I've taken leave of my senses
Since love came knocking on my door
Feelings long ago abandoned
Have now risen to the fore

You touched a place inside me
That was a wilderness until now
For a moment time stood still
As you kissed me on the brow

With inhibitions cast aside
You showed me love in all its glory
Through each and every verse
Of love's neverending story

You filled my empty heart
With passion and desire
Since you came into my life
It is to love I now aspire

* * *

"I never knew how to live
until I knew how to love"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-03-21 06:35 PM


Suetang
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-21 06:44 PM


How beautiful Sue!
When I'm a bit blue or lonely..
I know I can count on an uplifting romantic
write from you to pick me up.
And this one is most certainly a lovely!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-03-22 09:59 AM


soo sweet , nice write

.......
JDW III

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2004-03-22 04:44 PM


So beautifully romantic, dear Sue.

Well you do!

Love, Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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5 posted 2004-03-22 04:51 PM


Hi Sue ... A wonderful write as always and so romantic.

Hope all is well with you and I miss you. Drop me an email when you have a chance and let me know what's new and how you are.

Huggles, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-03-23 04:54 AM


Sue just one word describes this love poem...Brilliant....

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-03-23 12:24 PM


Sue

Lovely

Dave

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-03-23 12:32 PM


Sue, you could sell these and make it big!
Goodknight
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9 posted 2004-03-23 07:10 PM


Sue - you do write romance nad love and oh so well - Paul
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10 posted 2004-03-23 08:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I have missed your poetry the last few weeks, yay, as always you soar like a butterfly across these pages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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11 posted 2004-03-24 02:36 AM


Sue -- lovely love-filled poem!  
Toerag
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Ala bam a
12 posted 2004-03-24 07:54 AM


I spend too much time just staying alive...guess I'll never really know love....well done
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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13 posted 2004-03-24 04:23 PM




Well done, and well said!

"toss me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
14 posted 2004-03-24 05:41 PM


A beautiful write Sue.....The picture is so fitting!

Eric

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