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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-21 03:56 PM


Unfortunately the aire received today
has moderated
the english language

We apologise for the interrupton

From your bodies comes this essence
Taking everything by the strength
You understand the power of this prime

On old castles
You learn

Your ideas

Casting

A net

For

Words

dave

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-21 06:02 PM


We understood that the projected Holywood invasion of Earth has been delayed

Sorry

We are having trouble with contractors.

We apologise for the delay in invading

dave

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-21 06:26 PM



Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-03-21 08:15 PM


I'm casting out a net to find the words to describe this little ditty of poetry.
Interesting, food for thought, caught in my net.
Bon-Bon

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-21 08:20 PM


Grover

Thanks

Bonnie

Love yaaaaa

dave

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2004-03-21 09:25 PM


Casting a net,
For words to fill a poem,
To capture a sunny beach,
Casting Annette
…  … that might be a touch before your time

English and Americanize English
Is very similar to speaking physics and chemistry

As for the Hollywood invasion
They are getting a new Director
I’m personally voting for Alfred Hitchcock
Sure he’s dead, but what the heck,  would you want
Ron Howard?

Anyway
Keep up the good work
Or what ever it is you are doing here,

Gloom

jwesley
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6 posted 2004-03-21 09:30 PM


Kool, and as for the invasion... Hitchcock would be great...I mean, who better to lead an invasion but the dead....

jwesley

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-03-21 10:08 PM


Professor Gloom, Jwesley

You guys are great

Alfred Hitchcock has my bet any day with the sligh reservation that there is a bit of chicken and egg

He has to appear as per his own dictates

What would a Hitchcock be without Hitchcock

Dave


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