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Babigurl2k23617
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since 2004-03-21
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0 posted 2004-03-21 10:33 AM


THIS POEM IS TRUE
I never met
I never met a person
who felt like me
I alwayz thought I alwayz thought
I would but this
person died before i could
I can tell because of where the
person is right now
She would have never been
in this situation if she felt loved
But i know it wasnt her fault
I was told i would meet this person
But the next day she was pronounced dead
WHY
Its hurting me still even though i never met her
but it would hurt more if
i did meet her
but i know i will meet her
in the meantime when I
Die!!

TASHA
REST IN PEACE lADY TASHA


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-21 12:08 PM


Welcome to Passions, where you might meet more than a few you can relate to in poetry. Enjoy your time, make sure you visit some of the other forums to get acquainted with the variety of writers who post here.
Also, we each limit ourselves to three posts per day or less, since there are so many members.
Perhaps Tasha will be your poetic muse?

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-21 12:18 PM


It sounds almost of though you are dealing with people who are in need

If you are, it is hard not to be involved because you have to be willing to be involved before you can start, but there is a finite limit when the involvement, no matter what becomes personal

You write as though you blame yourself for something you had no control other

I would also say welcome to Passions and like every family we are never perfect

Dave

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-03-21 12:25 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I'm sure you will enjoy it here..
Relax, read and reply to others.
Take a look at all the Forums we offer.
But, most of all....have fun!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-03-21 12:50 PM


Hello there.

Welcome to Passions! I know you'll like it here. Hope you stay awhile.

hugs,
passing shadows

Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-21 06:38 PM


Hello! Welcome to PIP! Looks like you're off to a great start!
Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-03-21 06:42 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoy yourself - read, respond and learn - it's fun!!   Chris

Rdz9
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7 posted 2004-03-22 06:34 PM


Aye... Nice first post... Welcome to Passions.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-03-22 11:04 PM


Nice writing...James
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