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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-21 10:05 AM



Granting Of The Sacrifice

I never
asked anything
of you
I was
trying to
give you
something



"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-03-21 12:40 PM


Sometimes they just don't get it do they?
Love ya pretty lady~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-21 12:49 PM


Maybe the surprise is to allow them to tell you what they would really want

but there is always a danger in that

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-03-21 12:51 PM


some people just don't see that, do they?
sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA
4 posted 2004-03-21 01:18 PM


Geez I get it

            I can never accept
                anything
                from you
              Unless you can
                take from
                  me too

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-03-21 02:33 PM


Powerful words.

Eric

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

6 posted 2004-03-21 03:16 PM


My Heart Asked For Something

. . . but only
the opportunity
to reply
"You're welcome"


e
(thanks for this inspiration, Helen)

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