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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2004-03-21 12:09 PM


Now

And in that moment
  I will see the promise
All that I have been
  that I have created
From the birth of a thought
  to what did become
The striking force
  of amber
To the spark that burns
  with brilliance
Seized in promise
  suddenly gone..

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-21 01:15 AM


"From the birth of a thought
  to what did become"
enjoyed this pondering thought

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-03-21 03:33 AM


and all we have is now...

nice write

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3 posted 2004-03-21 04:33 AM


Makes you think

Dave

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-03-21 12:01 PM


Those pinnacle moments...

Wonderful write.
TD

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5 posted 2004-03-21 04:23 PM


SG

A profound place in time...enjoyed!

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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-03-21 05:11 PM


Awesome !
Enjoyed, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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7 posted 2004-03-22 11:17 AM


This is a fine example of your writing that I have been missing while you were away!!!

Love and Amber Light,
EA

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