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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-03-20 08:58 PM



Whisper to me
let me know you are there

welcome me

at your guarded gate
into unchartered waters
as i feel my way inside you

call out to me
let me know you desire me

welcome me

further out
to sink into your depths  

invade me
take me to your sacred spot

no looking back now
i've past your shoreline

lock me
into your warm embrace

endless, without any walls
to keep us apart now

dissolve me
into mere foam

to sit by the sands
when you tire of me

cry for me
not lover,

as i will always remember
that i've been loved



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-21-2004 01:40 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-03-20 09:00 PM


Applause!!!
TD

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-03-20 09:19 PM


pure poetry goddess

.......
JDW III

Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-03-20 10:22 PM


...awesome...passionate...
~K~

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-20 10:30 PM


Very beautiful -- what passion you express!   ......jo
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5 posted 2004-03-21 12:28 PM


very nice
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-03-21 02:36 AM


another inked beauty
DavePage
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7 posted 2004-03-21 04:36 AM


Like it

Dave

bklynboy
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8 posted 2004-03-21 07:49 AM


of course you've been loved.....and your stuff always sweeps me away
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-03-21 08:16 AM



thanks all

sea_of_okc
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10 posted 2004-03-21 01:27 PM


Simply superb
Loved it!

DavePage
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11 posted 2004-03-21 01:49 PM


Ink

I understated my feelings - I loved it but it was late for me

Dave

Blush
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12 posted 2004-03-21 11:40 PM


Very beautiful and passionate
I posted one earlier too come see me wont you?
Blessings
Susan~

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